Conversation at 4:16pm
- nsent5
- 2 days ago
- 2 min read

Waiting at Track 16
On a midwinter afternoon
The waning azure that drifted when I entered
The station below the skyline.
My mind recalls
That long Wednesday
Waiting for the train, and my feet's
Rhythmic taps on the marble floor.
Where my heart
Remained still and quiet
My eyes wavered, to the wristwatch
Drawing a picture of 4:16pm.
'Do you mind if I sit here?'
Slightly startled, I look up
To a smiling face with white hair
With kind, eloquent eyes.
'So, how was your day?'
He asked, his smile never fading
Not forced, but growing
With happiness, from the heart.
In a land where there remains for me
Lots to learn, and on a day
When I wanted to run back home
Came one question that comforted my frantic soul.
'My day was good! How about yours?'
'It was good too, quite long, but a nice day :)'
'Do you work in the city?'
'Yes, and you?' 'Oh, I go to college here every day'
'That seems like a lot of work (laughs)'
'Yes, a 5-day job', I laugh along
Reveling in this light, happy break
On a day that rested heavy.
This small, tranquil conversation
Amidst the noise, of people rushing home
Of the chugging of trains
Pulling up along the steel tracks.
'Oh well, my train is here'
'Ahh ok, thank you and see you'
'You too, have a blessed day', and I watch
His calm walk amidst hurried steps towards the track.
Though never again, till today
I have come across him
One conversation that remains
A reminder of kindness in a spinning world.
How a few minutes
Of a kind act, no matter
How colossal or small
Is still kindness that colors a day special.
One conversation that woke,
Me to several others
Who had done the same before
Yet on happy days I hadn't paid heed.
The passerby who gave a warm smile
On his way down the street
The bus driver who never failed
To ask everyone about their day.
The friends who check up on me
My family who has gone
Above and beyond
To look out for me every day.
Tiny moments that open
My eyes, to the goodness
Existing in tiny pockets
Of fleeting moments in our long lives.
Where we believe
The world to be a cruel place
Transient moments that remind us
To look around,
To see the silent,
Hidden kindness
That waits to stumble upon us and teach
That the world, was always
And will be, forever
No matter the wrongdoings
And all the bad encounters,
A good, beautiful place for those who believe.

-Nandhini
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